Comments on: Wild Geese http://blog-of-z.com/index.php/2008/05/10/wild-geese/ "Find out the reason that commands you to write" - Rilke Fri, 18 May 2012 23:21:00 -0700 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.1.3 By: eks http://blog-of-z.com/index.php/2008/05/10/wild-geese/comment-page-1/#comment-59 eks Sun, 11 May 2008 16:13:07 +0000 http://blog-of-z.com/?p=37#comment-59 galing. i like these kinds of poem/prose. parang yung kay oriah (the invitation, the dance). i wish i could write something as good as this one. xxx Sit beside me in long moments of shared solitude, knowing both our absolute aloneness and our undeniable belonging. Dance with me in the silence and in the sound of small daily words, holding neither against me at the end of the day. ... Don't say, "Yes!" Just take my hand and dance with me. galing. i like these kinds of poem/prose. parang yung kay oriah (the invitation, the dance). i wish i could write something as good as this one.

xxx

Sit beside me in long moments of shared solitude,
knowing both our absolute aloneness and our undeniable belonging.
Dance with me in the silence and in the sound of small daily words,
holding neither against me at the end of the day.
…
Don’t say, “Yes!”
Just take my hand and dance with me.

]]> By: onyxx http://blog-of-z.com/index.php/2008/05/10/wild-geese/comment-page-1/#comment-57 onyxx Sat, 10 May 2008 09:41:45 +0000 http://blog-of-z.com/?p=37#comment-57 i think i like this poem. it speaks of acceptance, tolerance and goodwill :) i think i like this poem. it speaks of acceptance, tolerance and goodwill :)

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